you say brings problems i just have a question is it heavy drama, ntr, are any of the girls forced to join an organization behind your back or forced too be with other man leaving the mc helpless to stop it, etc
Quick question, is this game still being worked on and roughly how frequently is the game updated if it isn't already finished ? I haven't played yet but I am worried about getting invested and after 4 hours or so finding out that I have to wait 3 months for an update or something.
How do i make abigail drink the N.E.P.Y, i've managed to produce all 3 "drugs" but i can't seem to progress abigail's storyline.... And is there anything i can do with the shopkeeper? Thank you
After playing the game for a while, I have a couple of comments. First, the english version still seems to have a lot of French in the conversations, especially with Alice & the store clerk. Is this on purpose or just missed in the translation? Second, the english version also seems to be using either incorrect words or grammar that makes some of the conversations having to be read over a couple of times to be fully understandable. This could be because of the use of an incorrect translation, grammar or way that sentences are worded.. For example when chatting with Abigail, what are revisions? Revisions of what? Something to do with study help? Conversations with Alice & the Doctor contain similar problems in the english.
Overall, the game, being Renpy based, is easy to use, but it would be good to have an information text file or tutorial (although there was a page that showed some but not all) to explain some of the buttons that show up in the UI. It took me a little while to figure out how I was supposed to read the instruction manual from the bunker. Keep up the good work and I will look forward to your next update.
There are french words with Alice in the english version and english words in the french version, it's on purpose (because she is bilingual). However you shouldn't see french words with the store clerk but speech mistakes, also done on purpose here (because her english isn't perfect and she has a very exotic accent).
Concerning the translation, yeah there are some incorrects words that need to be corrected, mainly the expressions because I don't know them very well (since I'm french). Can you give me more details about the issue with the conversation between Alice and the Doctor?
The next update will contain a tutorial about the UI and a quest log which will prevent being lost.
I have gone through each conversation up through the first visit to the clinic. I do have some detailed comments for you. They are in a text file. Are you on Discord or do you have a contact email so I can send them or do you just want me to post them here? Let me know. If this works for you after seeing them, I would be glad to go through the rest of the game to point out recommended changes.
The other languages are in words still in it, to visualize the accent of the characters... 😅 Cuz accents are sexy. Grammar is OK in my opinion, I've seen worse, don't you think? But I admit, that there could be some clues, what the buttons are for, and how to open the menu to save... XD
Mmh, Mega or Up2Share offer the same service so I don't have any particular reason to choose one rather than the other.
But if you want the Mega links I invite you to subscribe to my newsletter on my website, you will automatically receive an email with them (of course if you're not interested in the emails I send, you can unsubscribe whenever you want).
Seems that way. I've tried to now download from this site on the desktop app and the main site in the browser to the same results. When trying to download from the browser, it opens up suggested games but no download starts at all.
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you say brings problems i just have a question is it heavy drama, ntr, are any of the girls forced to join an organization behind your back or forced too be with other man leaving the mc helpless to stop it, etc
To bad it's not in English.
Quick question, is this game still being worked on and roughly how frequently is the game updated if it isn't already finished ? I haven't played yet but I am worried about getting invested and after 4 hours or so finding out that I have to wait 3 months for an update or something.
when is the next update?
How do i make abigail drink the N.E.P.Y, i've managed to produce all 3 "drugs" but i can't seem to progress abigail's storyline.... And is there anything i can do with the shopkeeper? Thank you
Really digging this! Seems like all of my comments have already been addressed too! Going to be keeping an eye on this one!
After playing the game for a while, I have a couple of comments. First, the english version still seems to have a lot of French in the conversations, especially with Alice & the store clerk. Is this on purpose or just missed in the translation? Second, the english version also seems to be using either incorrect words or grammar that makes some of the conversations having to be read over a couple of times to be fully understandable. This could be because of the use of an incorrect translation, grammar or way that sentences are worded.. For example when chatting with Abigail, what are revisions? Revisions of what? Something to do with study help? Conversations with Alice & the Doctor contain similar problems in the english.
Overall, the game, being Renpy based, is easy to use, but it would be good to have an information text file or tutorial (although there was a page that showed some but not all) to explain some of the buttons that show up in the UI. It took me a little while to figure out how I was supposed to read the instruction manual from the bunker. Keep up the good work and I will look forward to your next update.
There are french words with Alice in the english version and english words in the french version, it's on purpose (because she is bilingual). However you shouldn't see french words with the store clerk but speech mistakes, also done on purpose here (because her english isn't perfect and she has a very exotic accent).
Concerning the translation, yeah there are some incorrects words that need to be corrected, mainly the expressions because I don't know them very well (since I'm french). Can you give me more details about the issue with the conversation between Alice and the Doctor?
The next update will contain a tutorial about the UI and a quest log which will prevent being lost.
Thanks for your feedbacks !
I have gone through each conversation up through the first visit to the clinic. I do have some detailed comments for you. They are in a text file. Are you on Discord or do you have a contact email so I can send them or do you just want me to post them here? Let me know. If this works for you after seeing them, I would be glad to go through the rest of the game to point out recommended changes.
Hi,
You can contact me at this address :
archronique@ unforeseenascent.com
If you want you can also come on my Discord Server by following this link :
https://discord.gg/SGa7gmk
Thanks!
I sent a small text file to you thru Discord. Let me know if you would like me to continue. Thanks.
The other languages are in words still in it, to visualize the accent of the characters... 😅 Cuz accents are sexy. Grammar is OK in my opinion, I've seen worse, don't you think? But I admit, that there could be some clues, what the buttons are for, and how to open the menu to save... XD
Will there be sexy times in this game?
Absolutely!
The Alpha 1.0 was just an introduction to the story, the characters and the gameplay, the next updates will be much more NSFW.
Why don't you post the downloads on Mega??
Mmh, Mega or Up2Share offer the same service so I don't have any particular reason to choose one rather than the other.
But if you want the Mega links I invite you to subscribe to my newsletter on my website, you will automatically receive an email with them (of course if you're not interested in the emails I send, you can unsubscribe whenever you want).
Thank you for your quick reply.
Interesting thing but the download for the Mac file doesn't happen at all when I hit the button. Possibly an issue here?
Weird, it works for me, do you have the same issue with the other links?
Seems that way. I've tried to now download from this site on the desktop app and the main site in the browser to the same results. When trying to download from the browser, it opens up suggested games but no download starts at all.